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Claiming the Throne Page 5

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Story is written by me
Art by FalyneVarger 
Colours by lummage 
Lettering by UberVestigium 
Logo made by Lukewarm Media
Mercenary characters and Red Tyrannosaurus are owned by Lukewarm Media and used with permission
Albertonykus material made with permission from Albertonykus 

Wow this took a while to upload due to its large size, if you want to see its original size, download it. Anyway I listed the names due to the fact that apart from Tyrannosaurus Rex, most people don't know about the various other dinosaurs that are out there. So as a staple I decided to play this scene out with the so-called stock dinosaurs, i.e common ones in fiction, interestingly enough each of these animals have been in at least one of the Jurassic Park movies. Another issue is that there are several dinosaurs that look like each other to the untrained eye like Brachiosaurus and Giraffatitan so they had to be mentioned to be clear but I'm going on a wind.

Anyway the first thing you do after staking out your territory is locate the nearest available food source and see the variety so that you know early on what your success rates are early on with them. Then you can plan your hunting strategies.
Story by Me Art by FalyneVarger

Claiming the Throne is inspired by Primal Carnage with Permission

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:star::star::star::star-half::star-empty: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star-half::star-empty::star-empty: Impact

Vision - I think this is a good story, and I think the faces of the juvenile/adolescent tyrannosaurs pack in the first and last panel pretty much say everything they need to without any words.

Originality - I'm sorry about this, but I've had to mark you down because of the usage of the "Stock Dinosaurs" trope. Any dinosaur king fan - myself included - can pretty much tell you what any obscure dinosaur shown is easily by its size, head shape, bi/quadrupedal body structures and builds. Other than that, this is very unique and interesting.

Technique - Looking at this art style, it is simple enough for younger viewers to look at, yet complex enough to get a high level of detail, even with distance shots in the first and last panel.

Impact - I've only marked it this low as it is very early in the story, so I can't actually see any emotional bonding yet other than the Tyrannosaurus pack.